考研英语小作文求职信
距离最后的考试只有两个多月的时间,冲刺序幕正式拉开。英语复习到这个阶段,最重要的就是作文。要想在最后的考试成绩中脱颖而出,现阶段就必须要把精力放在分值占在30分的写作上。
考研英语中大作文的要求是内容切题、表达清楚、文字连贯、句式多变和语言规范。小作文考察点在信息点的覆盖、语言的准确性、文章组织的连贯性上。
其中小作文占10分,分为求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等等二十多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式,都有固定词语要求。 求职信是申请信的一种,是写信人就某一职位向收信人提出请求。求职信一般包括以下几个方面的内容:首先要阐述清楚招聘信息的来源,以及所申请的职位;其次简述个人信息;然后进一步强调自己的能力,表达抱负,并请求给予面试机会;最后提出自己的希望,希望得到面试的机会,并且告诉对方你的联系方式。
求职信的语言属于正式用语,在写作过程中一定要注意用词简洁准确,语气礼貌自信,态度不卑不亢,所给信息具有一定的`可信度。尤其是在强调自身经历和优点的时候,更应把握尺度。
写作“三步走”:
自我介绍,说明求职目的—>展示个人能力、经历及求职动机—>希望面试机会、表示感谢
注意:
由于篇幅较短,而申请者需要尽可能地向用人单位推销自己,所以在求职信中宜笼统概说自己的求学和工作经历,突出一至两个吸引眼球的闪光点即可。
范文解析:
Directions: You are a Business English major due to graduate from Beijing University in June 2010.Wite a letter of no less than 100 words to apply for a position of secretary in a company which requires the candidate master fluent English and good computer skills. Introduce yourself, ask for an interview and give you contact information in the end.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for the position of secretary advertised in Beijing Today. I majored in Business English. My training in Business English and Secretarial English will definitely meet your qualifications.
I’ll graduate form Beijing University in June 2010. In addition to the required courses of my major, I’ve studied Computer as my second major. I’ve also had a pa
rt-time job as a secretary in a company for 2 years. I am confident that my qualifications and experience make me suitable for this position.
I have enclosed a complete resume for detailed information. I hope you will consider me for this position. Please reach me by telephone 139……
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
常见句式
1、I am applying for the position of secretary advertised in……
我想申请……招聘广告中的秘书一职。
2、I am writing in response to your advertisement in…of April 6.
我看到了4月6日贵公司……上的招聘广告,于是写信申请。
3、The requirement outlined in your ad in…for a general manager assistant appear to mesh almost exactly with my own.
我本人的条件与你们刊登在……上的招聘广告中的所要求的总经理助理的条件完全吻合。
4、I think I am the right person for the job you advertised.
相信我是你们招聘的职位的最佳人选。
5、The key strengths that I possess for success in this position include… 我能胜任此职位的实力包括……
6、I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of…
我认为我是……工作的合格人选,所以我写信自荐。
7、Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. 如果能给我面试的机会,我将不胜感激。
8、Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.
谢谢考虑我的申请,期待您的回复。
9、I have enclosed my resume.
简历附上。
10、I can be reached by telephone…
可以通过……这个电话联系我。
11、If you need to know any more about me, please contact me at… 如果您想了解更多关于我的信息,请通过……和我联系。
8-10分
Dear Mr. Yu,
I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience. I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Mr. Yu,
I just read an advertisement in(改为on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of(改为for) your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改为of) computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(删除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8分
同学你好,要注意控制字数,考研的时候超过20个词扣0.5分,超过50词只给1分辛苦分。标点符号与后面的单词空一格。你的作文没有大问题,但是你对介词的使用不太清楚,这说明你的语感还不太好,因此,建议你多读一些英文书籍。