Dear Susan：
When I learn that this session‘s assessment of my performance is very positiveI am very delighted. I enjoy working forA.D Corporation and I am eager for continue to serve the firm to the best of my ability. In the light of this positive assessment,I would like to request a review of my current position as the H&R Director. I assume,there would also be an appropriate salary adjustment involved in this promotion. As you know,every assignment you give to me was completed very well. In this session I was major in charge of the staff mobility and the assessment of the stuffs of A.D Corporation,and from the beginning to now thanks to my management our company’s stuffs performed very well,we did every assignment in high quality and efficiency.
And the relationship of the stuffs was very harmony we treat each other as our close friends,when we have an assessment to do never have a people tried to avoid the responsibility of his own,all of us tried our best to do the assignment in the best quality. Of cause,I have done my best to make my company runs smoothly. Needless to say,I enjoy my current jobvery much.
However,the above projects do exceeded the original job description. They require me to invest extra hours and take additional responsibilities in order to ensure their proper implementation. Given my positive performance and additional effort I have made,I would very much appreciate your consideration in reviewing my officialposition with the company,along with the appropriate Salary adjustment.I am sure that I will work harder if you agree with my application. Thank you for your attention and I look forward to your favorable reply. Yours sincerely
I'm grateful for the opportunity to work for you and I enjoy doing so. I hope you'll agree that,in the two years I've worked for you,I've become an integral member of your team and accomplished a great deal. For example,in the last six months alone,I've List of major accomplishments。
However,I'm still working for the initial salary on which we agreed two years ago. As I recall,we also agreed to renegotiate my salary in two years based on my accomplishments,and that time has come. In light of my accomplishments and as per our agreement,I'm respectfully requesting an immediate pay rise of six percent,to be followed in six months by a performance-based pay rise of an additional three percent. I strongly feel that I've earned the immediate pay raise and I'm confident that I will also earn the six-month raise based on my performance. But I'm willing to negotiate,as per our agreement. If you would like to meet to discuss this,please let me know.
Thanks again for the opportunity. I look forward to continuing to be a key player on your team in a mutually-rewarding relationship.