I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong University P. R. China. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering I am writing to apply for acceptance into your
In 1995 I entered the Nanjing University of Science &Technology (NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester and my overall GPA(89.5/100) ranked No.1 among 113 students. In 1999 I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test. I selected the Shanghai Jiao Tong University to continue my study for its best reputation on Combinatorial Optimization and Network Scheduling where my research interest lies.
At the period of my graduate study my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the department. In the second semester I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and matured students only. This year I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis.
Research experience and academic activity
When a sophomore I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. In 1997 I participated in simulation tool development for the scheduling system in Prof. Wang’s lab. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab I designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. In 1998 I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis &dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.
In 1999 I joined the distinguished Professor Yu-Geng Xis research group aiming at Network flow problem solving and Heuristic algorithm research. Soon I was engaged in the FuDan Gene Database Design. My duty was to pick up the useful information among different kinds of gene matching format. Through the comparison and analysis for many heuristic algorithms I introduced an improved evolutionary algorithm -- Multi-population Genetic Algorithm.
By dividing a whole population into several sub-populations this improved algorithm can effectively prevent GA from local convergence and promote various evolutionary orientations. It proved more efficiently than SGA in experiments too. In the second semester I joined the workshop-scheduling research in Shanghai Heavy Duty Tyre plant. The scheduling was designed for the rubber-ma-ki-ng process that covered not only discrete but also continuous circumstances. To make a balance point between optimization quality and time cost I proposed a Dynamic layered Scheduling method based on hybrid Petri Nets. The practical application showed that the average makespan was shortened by a large scale. I also publicized two pa-pe-rs in core journals with this idea. Recently I am doing research in the Composite Predict of the Electrical Power system assisted with the technology of Data Mining for Bao Steel. I try to combine the Decision Tree with Receding Optimization to provide a new solution for the Composite Predictive Problem. This project is now under construction.
Besides In July 20xx I got the opportunity to give a lecture in English in Asia Control Conference (ASCC) which is one of the top-level conferences among the world in the area of control and automation. In my senior year I met Prof. Xiao-Song Lin a visiting professor of mathematics from University of California-Riverside I learned graph theory from him for my network research. These experiences all rapidly expanded my knowledge of English and the understanding of western culture.
Good morning Sir， （What will you say if it is a woman？）
I am glad to be here for this interview。 First， let me thank you for finding time in the midst of pressing affairs。
I am 25 years old and I am local。 （I live locally sounds better） I am seeking an opportunity to work with XXX as Sales。 （。。IN sales or As a Sales representative/whatever）。My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company。
I have a bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field。（pause） Graduated from the XXX university in 20xx。 Over the past three years， I have worked with XXX Co。，Ltd as Sales （again， in sales or as a sales man/person/rep？） who responsible （with responsibility mainly） for the market of Hunan。 During this period， I have learnt much。 I learned the values of teamwork and commitment， how to win， how to work hard， how to concentrate and focus on goals， and how to balance my time and priorities。 Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your company。
I enjoy thinking， enjoy learning， enjoy working， （and I am ）able to bear work pressure。
In my free time， I often participate （in） activities such as table tennis （and） badminton。
I am expecting to become your colleague on some day。 （More tactful to say ’I would love to become you colleague/join the company）
Because being offhand in advance， let’s leave it at that。 （This sentence makes no sense。 ’Being offhand’ means to be rude， inconsiderate， ill—mannered so I don’t think that is whay you mean！ In advance of what？ ’Let’s leave it at that’ is a command， it sounds rather abrupt and ill—mannered to me， again I don’t think this is what you meant。 How about ’I would love to join your company and you would not regret giving me this opportunity。’ and just finish with a smile！）
Thanks。
My name is XXX. I'm from 02E1 class, which is an e-commerce major. Here is my brief introduction:
I am a graduate of Guangdong Foreign Trade School and will graduate from XXXX in June. I cherish the opportunity to study at school, study the cultural courses carefully and master the professional knowledge more familiar. At the same time, I have learned a lot of things about doing things. In the past three years, learning English has honed my confidence and ambition. Facing the advent of the knowledge economy, computer technology has also been widely used. As a secondary school student in twenty-first Century, it is a new challenge. Not only have a solid professional skills, but also need more knowledge. So during secondary school I continue to learn, continue to struggle, to learn all kinds of computer networks, web design, Internet technology, 20xx Server microcomputer principle, the documentary credit, English correspondence, international trade practice and other professional knowledge. In addition, we have selected case studies, business agents, Photoshop, image processing and logistics knowledge to improve our comprehensive quality. In view of this, I hope to get a position after graduation and earnestly hope to use my learning skills to make my modest contribution to the society. Treat study, I work hard, treat my work, I can do the same, love, dedication, cautious, responsible, meticulous. In life, I am optimistic, passionate, sincere and tolerant. I am confident that I can do my job. In the spirit of "meeting difficulties and getting up", I will overcome all kinds of difficulties with my ability and be better qualified for future work.